Breathe No More...Chapter 11...

Feeling: depressed
[Kari slipped into the blackness of death.] Evan screamed at her. Even as they pulled up to the hospital. Evan pulled Kari out, only to lose her to the doctors and nurses. He ran with them until someone held him back. A doctor shook his head no. Evan sighed. Mr. Thomas came to stand next to Evan. "She'll make it," he choked. "No," Evan said. "She'll die. That has always been her sweet suicide." --------- Kari felt light. Her world was finally feeling right. But the loss of her pain was just the beginning. She had to forget everything to be accepted by the kingdom of Christ, her savior, her suicide... THE END ---------- I didn't expect this to come out happy. Really, all this is is my pain dying. It leaves me (Evan) to be free without all the pain (Kari). What else can you expect? I will write another one... Help me find my sweet suicide...Kari
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Great story!!! It is true nothing ever ends with a happy meaning