Breathe No More...Chapter 10...

Listening to: Missing - Evanescence
Feeling: depressed
[He turned and stormed out of house.] The next day, Kari walked to school. It was getting dark by rain clouds. Kari sighed and walked faster. Once at school, she looked for Kat, hoping to talk to her before Evan did. She saw Kat, but she also saw Evan with her. Kari turned around and headed towards her locker. Once at her locker, Kari opened it up. A small piece of paper fell out. She opened it up. It was a letter by Evan. 'I'm going to tell someone, Kari. I can't live knowing what you do. Evan' Kari tore up the note. She sighed and placed her hand on her left arm. She winced under the pain. She had begun to cut her arms. Kari sighed again and closed her locker. She noticed Evan with Mr. Thomas. Kari began to walk towards her first period class. She heard Evan call for her. So, she ran into a bathroom. She locked herself in a stall and waited for them to leave. She heard them yell at her from outside. She was beginning to hate it. "Kari?" Kari looked up to her left. Kat was standing there, tears in her eyes. "Kari?" "Get the fuck away from me," Kari breathed, angered that she couldn't be alone. "Kari, listen to me. We only want to help." "How do you know what I fucking go through? You don't know shit about me anymore, Jolie. I've fucking died!" Kari yelled leaving the bathroom. Evan grabbed her arm. Mr. Thomas looked at her and pulled up her sleve. Kat came out to notice the still bleeding cuts. Mr. Thomas looked at her. "This is enough, Kari. You shouldn't do this." "Who are you to tell me what I can and cannot do? You aren't my fucking parents!" Evan slapped Kari. "Evan!" Mr. Thomas pulled Evan away from Kari. Kat rushed over to Kari. The girl looked at Evan. "You're going to regret all of this shit, Evan. Be lucky if I'm even alive tomorrow!" Kari ran down the hall. "Kari!" yelled Kat. "Kari! Come back!" Mr. Thomas yelled. Kari just ran, tears pouring from her eyes. She ran out of the school and into the rain. She looked around. Then, began to run towards her house. Kari just ran. She heard someone call for her, but she ignored them. She just ran. Once she got to her house, she entered and threw her bookbag on the ground. She didn't even bother to close the door. She ran into her room. On her bed was her blade. Kari looked at it. She took off her shirt. "This is it. I have finally found my sweet suicide," she said. "Kari!" Kari ran over to her bedroom door and closed it. She locked it. "Kari!" Evan pounded on the door. Kari could hear Kat in the background with Mr. Thomas. Kari backed away from the door. "Hikari! Don't do this!" Evan yelled. "I'm going to die! I will breathe no more!" Kari yelled back taking the blade in her hand. She pushed it deep into her left wrist. She did the same with the right. Blood poured from her wounds. Kari watched her blood drip to the floor. Evan began to run at the door. He finally broke it down. "Kari!" Kari lied on the floor. Most of her blood was lying outside of her body. She looked up at Evan and smiled. "Kari, what have you done?" Evan asked picking her up. Mr. Thomas and Kat looked at them as they went outside. The rain hit Kari's wrist, making the blood drip much more. Kari sighed. She felt so tired. "Kari, stay with me!" Evan yelled. Kari could feel the moving car. "Hikari, don't give up now!" Mr. Thomas added. "Kari! Oh my God!" yelled Kat. Kari smiled. "And I bleed. I bleed. And I breathe. I breathe. I breathe. I breathe no more," she sang. Then darkness over took her. Kari slipped into the blackness of death. -------- *tears* Help me find my sweet suicide...Kari
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so is it done or you will save her...kat
I'm not finished...kat
great climax!!
PS please keep writing your a great writer