New Poem

Listening to: mom leaving
Feeling: popular
chapstick kisses and plastic hearts my love is a target and your words are darts don't leave me down here on this damp river bed ti'm ready to live my heart has been fed so please save me the waves are crashing high above my head i'm scared of this tide beneath your wings i will hide my soul sings and i'm ready to fly ******************************* well that was my new poem...i love these poetic spurts of mine...they're so great!!!...well its a work in progress so tell me what you think about it...i don't have a title yet so if you guys have any suggestions!?!?! * * * * * UP FRICKEN DATE.... three things i hate the most...but can't live with out... 1.people, 2.love, 3. emo days like these... * * * and it only gets longer number: 2, me and you clothing brand: anything shoes: vans and converses saying: i love you tv show: don't really watch tv... sport: badmitton, tennis, volleyball vegetable: Carrot fruit: Apple movie: the princess bride magazine: YM & cosmo girl actor: adam sandler, jim carey, tom hanks. actress: Drew Barrymore, Julia Roberts. candy: suckers gum: spearmint scent: um... candy bar: uh...snickers sherbert flavor: Rainbow Sherbert (Stawberry, Orange,Rasberry) color: red season: winter holiday: valentines day...well if you have some one to share it with punk rock band: blink 182 singer: sue me...but i like jessica simpson's voice...not her...just her voice group: All American Rejects...well lots more...i just don't want to type them all rapper: .....not into rap... thing in your room: my bed...i love to dream...and its so comfortable... place to be: the beach and with chris...although i haven't been with chris yet...but i will...one day tv channel: turner classic movies overall food: bbq stuff, and chinese store: hot topic fast food:in-n-out restaurant: super king buffet (chinese) shape: heart time of day: midnight country: US state: california...mmmm yeah...i'm a total cali girl boys name:milo girls name: gwen mall: isn't one very close video game: don't play video games shampoo: apple shampoo...mmmm...or anything fruity board game: monopoly computer game:solitair car: cameros music video: baby i love you- jennifer lopez swear word:hmmm...i don't know word: love month:december cartoon character: ariel scary movie: anything...i wish i could watch one with chris...sniff... team: worship team...lol possession: my heart
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ok i dont know if this got posted before...but anyway. your poem is awesome. :D great work. im a poet myself, and love those particular emo days. hehe. and i agree, hippies rock.
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