A Cold Night in December *underconstruction* Tell me if good

White clouds down on the ground picking out the only flowers that still stand hands frozen with ice sickles the ice melts when you hold my hand Green and red flash across town hands linked together, like naturally bound we turn ice into water we make frowns into smiles we can make things last for a while We can make make this last but you left too soon sun was shining but now it's noon. i waited at the park by a bench my breath is breathing out cold i just think it's just everything you said. i relly dont know about this song grr
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this is good.
it's amazing, actuallyy.

the onlyy thing that doesn't pertain to me is the last line.
but that's because love takes so much away...
time&emotion
and it leaves youu with nothing but pain.

well onlyy for me.

hate seems like a much better compromise.
even though i don't like that either.
hate starts this never-ending circle.

♥verena
awww thanks so much for your comment :)
anyway, yes i like this one. the colours are really awesome.
love romina.
[rororo]
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